Fallacies

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1. “Oak Island Money Pit Mystery,” (June 5, 2010). YouTube Clip. 1:54-2:24 The layout of the money pit.


This YouTube video is a clip from a History Channel show discussing the origins controversies and facts involving the money pit on Oak Island. This video is very informative and easy to understand. If you have no prior knowledge of the subject this gives you a very Basic explanation of the conspiracy. It even goes into detail of the structure of the money pit and explains why even with today’s current technology we cannot reach the treasure.

I enjoyed watching this video it was originally reference to me through a friend this semester. I find this video to be accurate with all the other articles I’ve read online regarding the subject. To me this is extremely reliable as comes from the History Channel, which is proven accurate in the past.

Whanethewhip. "Oak Island Money Pit Mystery." YouTube. YouTube, 05 June 2010.


 2. Money Pit Diagram.


 

                   

















In this diagram, there is a very basic sketch of the money pit or area on Oak Island where there is believed to be treasure. It goes on to describe how every 10 feet, there are platforms of oak logs, and eventually other materials such as charcoal, putty, and cocoanut. At 90 feet there are stone slabs, and below that at 122 feet, empty space. 

This picture shows relevance to my topic, as it is a great representation of the money pit located in Oak Island. The diagram is a great visual example of what is discussed in the YouTube clip, from the previous example. It goes in depth as far showing each layer of the money pit and what is located in between. The picture even shows some of the treasures that have been found and where in the money pit they were located. I’m using this because it is a very easy way for readers, who have no knowledge of my topic, to understand the challenges involved in retrieving the treasure. It also shows how complex this design is, that was clearly created hundreds potentially thousands of years ago. It allows us to deduce that the people who made this elaborate design, were extremely smart. Another notable part is at 153 feet, where there is a tunnel to the south shore.


Santoso, Alex. "The Last Great Buried Treasure Mystery: The Money Pit at Oak
Island."Neatorama. N.p., 12 Nov. 2007. Web. 31 Mar. 2014.


“Oak Island.”  The Discovery: Paragraphs 1-5. How the money pit was found.


This entire webpage’s contents include very useful and well researched information. It describes everything from the discovery of the money pit, how it functions. The paragraphs that should be focused on (1-5) are a good introduction to the subject as it goes into detail about how the pit was found.

This section of the website provides good background on the Money Pit that was illustrated to readers in the last two annotations. After doing plenty of research I find this to be extremely accurate. I have done a lot of research on the subject and this site appears to be a clear example of how the conspiracy started, and what began the search for the alleged treasure. For any reader of our course or level of education, these paragraphs are a great example of how the legend began. In any case of a conspiracy, the origin has potential to be the most important part in proving success or succession.


"The Conspiracy Page." The Conspiracy Page. N.p., n.d. Web. 07 Apr. 2014. 


“First Hints of Treasure.” Paragraphs 1-5. 


These five paragraphs begin to discuss what might be in the Money Pit. After all that's what this whole mystery is about, people’s desire to find what is down in the pit. The paragraphs discuss that 3 gold links were discovered in the pit. This is important as it shows even more potential for a buried treasure at the bottom of the pit. 

In the suggested paragraphs, readers will now have an idea of what could be in the Money Pit on Oak Island. It goes well with the previous three examples as now they know the origin of the money pit, what it looks like, and now its contents. Since the pit is near impossible to get into, this would just entice further excavation. I believe that these paragraphs are very important for the readers of my blog to understand. The fact that there was a discovery of gold in the money pit inspired curiosity to potential money pit project investors and increased possibility for a big reward being at the bottom of the pit. Although no one knows for sure what is in the Money Pit, gold links are a good start. 

"Treasure: Oak Island: The Story of Oak Island." Treasure: Oak Island: The Story of Oak Island. N.p., n.d. Web. 07 Apr. 2014.   http://www.activemind.com/Mysterious/topics/oakisland/story.html



This entire webpage was full of useful information, very similar to the other annotations. It discusses the discovery and the design, but hits on tourism to oak island near the very end of the page.

It is very interesting that this page discusses that fact that there was a demand for tourism. This proves there is interest on this topic to the general public. The page talks about how there was a petition to  make the land on Oak Island public land. When these issues were raised, more attention was brought to the island itself and it actually turned the Canadian government against using the Island for commercial use. Now treasure hunters must receive licensing to continue hunting with the intention to keep what they find. 

"Oak Island Money PitThe Last Great Unsolved Mystery." Oak Island Money Pit. N.p., 2014. Web. 30 Apr. 2014.

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